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                KNIGHT OF BEASTOPIA

          Once upon a time there lived an enchanted kingdom called “Beastopia”. This kingdom was dwelled by many exalted beast. Lead by the Queen of storm, Cryptoriana. This queen was the legacy of Druid, witch of forest, with a pair of indigo eyes and cold breath, she spent every morning to read the book of cadaver. Rumor said that the book that she always read was about regenerate the soul or it called live eternally. She had two horns and wore a golden thorn crown that able to sting her enemy, Stormcrown. She had ten guardians, which wore a gold cloth with variant color of cloak. Cryptoriana built a house for her ten guardians and the position of their houses was surrounding her castle. The first guardian with red cloak was Aldebaran Harbringer, guardian that had Godmover, a power to move a mountain and summon the spirit of great bull, able to plowed a hundred people, Bullwark. The second with yellow cloak was Shakashmita, guardian that had lightspeed Punch, an onslaught strike with summoning spirit of Brute, Beasteldar. This two were loyal to the queen and disposed their life to protect the queen. There were twin female guardian with a pair of long claws and fangs, Ropyaku and Juuroku. Ropyaku with orange cloak had reddish claws and black fangs while Juuroku with violet cloak had violet claws and purple fangs their power was same, Critical Strike. Faster strike which able to rip their enemies, they only had one house right in front of rear door of castle.

          The four guardians were assigned to stand on the outpost at the main gate. There was a spoil child who always mocked them, he was a legacy of Mountkey, Sun Hyougang or it called Zyuoga with a red fur and red eyes, and he always threw a banana’s skin to the head of the guardian. As the calmest guardian, Shakashmita threw him back to the river. Many people believe that Zyouga had Spirit of Kong, a giant big red monkey that ruled the Monkopia, where many mountkey left happily before the squad of underworld burn down their village. After found by the queen of Beastopia. He was adopted by and lives in the very top room inside the castle.

          When the sun fell down behind the twin mountain, people in Beastopia spent their time to walk around or visiting a traditional market in front of the house of Harbringer, there were many blink things sold in the market. But the favorite place was, Epitome. It was like a coffee shop but offered a delicious juice and many kinds of coffee. Sometimes, queen visited that place only bought a glass of blueberry fused with pineapple accompanied by Juuroku.

          Meanwhile, in the underworld or it called Netherbeast, a place that filled by evil beasts that had been cursed by Cryptoriana for many years. This place was ruled by an indigo lycan, Hellscream. He had no claws except a twin black artificial claws that made from black diamond. Rumor said that his claws were able to make a scratch in the sky. Hellscream had unnatural hobby, it was make a village that he did not like in flames. His army was a creature that birth from bones within dark spell from Hellscream. Every ghoul was trained to fight in swordplay and magic. Their long claws be their sword and their power was the source of their magic. Hellscream was selfish and his only goal was to be an immortal creature, he had been hearing a rumor that, the Stormcrown from Cryptoriana was able to make the wearer immortal. Then he brought a thousand ghouls to rise up to the surface of the earth. The most dangerous thing here was, Hellscream was able to create a ghoul directly by giving a dark spell to the dead body that had been buried.

          It was a peace morning when, the Guardian with a green cloak, Groandur Sasori faces the queen and assigned to train Zyuoga to be the gate commander. This guardian was chosen because he was the one who knew history of Zyuoga village, event he ever lived there for ten years before Hellscream burned down it. After accepted a royal ordered from the queen, he, directly to take Zyuoga to the Wolfhaul, a place where guardian and soldier trained their skill and their muscle. There, they met Ropyaku and Juuroku forged their claws behind a pack of soldier trained by Grindergrill, a white black cloak guardian with golden mace that combined by hammer. Fact said that, his weapon brought a mass destruction in one swing. This guardian also had a big large shield from a thousand cursed diamonds. Cursed diamond existed in Etherland, an origin of Grindergrill, that land was the second land burned down by Hellscream after Monkopia. “Hi, Groan, who’s that? Do you not follow my training?” said Grin. “Nope, I have ordered by queen to train this spoiling monkey to be a main gate commander” replied Groan. But when two guardians had a small talk, suddenly Zyuoga take a banana that put in the corner, which was one of the foods for the trainer and soldier, knowing that Groandur with his power took Zyuoga back beside his position. Grin was wonder that Groandur’s disciple will be the great knight someday, after sensed Zyuoga’s Beaston.

          Beaston was the spirit of life and basic main power that had in everyone’s heart. The train was very difficult, even Zyuoga still learned the basic martial art. But suddenly, a creature landed with a storm crash the land. It was Leorius Coolda a brown cloak guardian. “Hi everyone, what’s up? Have you got your breakfast today?” he said friendly but no one response it. “Hello, my princess don’t you try to stop your train and have a rest with me for a while, I am sure you are tired”, he tried to talk with Juuroku but Ropyaku reply him, “we had better train our skill than fly around with your little green storm”. “That makes the village cloudy and rainy” add Juuroku.

          Leorius Coolda was the laziest guardian, his hobby was flying around with his green storm. He had no weapon accept his power to sting with his two hands, Electrifist. He brought a message and directly to enter the castle, facing the queen which had been eating for lunch. “Greetings, my lady, I am here to tell you that I have heard a stranger voice from underground and it is getting louder in every minutes”, report Leorius. “Well, let me ask you something, if I put a sweet cake on the floor, what will happen?” asked the queen. “Of course, it will invaded by ants, my lady”, answer Leorius. “As you know, my crown has the secret power, beside as the key to stabilize and rule Beastopia, but this thing which responsible the life in Beastopia. I am wearing it and become immortal, I become immortal for Beastopia’s sake” Explained the queen. “Then, what is the relation, my queen?” asked Leorius. “The strange voice that you have heard is my nemesis, it was Hellscream which struggle to rise up to the surface”. Explained queen. “Then, we just need to fight back and protect this kingdom, my lady”, Leorius said with full of aware and his beaston suddenly on fire. He directly left the queen and went to Wolfhaul to announced the case.

          Queen, was worry, her eyes ran blue and she starred to the peace condition of Beastopia and said “This view will runs black soon”. In the same time Zyuoga entered the castle and protested to the queen about his training with Groandur. “Yo, my lovelies mother, why do you look so sad? Do I make any trouble again? Said Zyuoga. “What are you doing in here, my son? Why do you abandon your trainer? Asked the queen, curiously. “Nope, my training has finish, moreover it has eve already” answered Zyuoga with stammered and hide his hands behind. “Son, you are smart but you are reckless too, Battleground is full of tears, blood, and rage. If you are not able to control your beaston and you still hope for help in the middle of war. You will fall behind in vain” explained the queen and wisdom within. Then the queen asked Zyuoga to have shower and dinner. The queen gathered her guardians to discuss the problem that would crush the kingdom. But she was shocked by the arrival of two guardian, with the golden cloak, twin divine axe, Exinta Rexian and silver cloak, heavenly gauntlets, Rozan Syoryuha. They had arrived from their journey to seek the Diamond Head skull, a sacred thing from Dimland. They had realized the queen’s problem. “My lady, I understand your anxious, as the exalted guardian, we will be your shield” Said Rexian. “Together, we won’t fall down easily” added Rozan with head down and giving the Diamond Head Skull. “Thank you, you two always cheer me up. Alright, ladies and Gentlemen, I am so sorry to gather you all in here and let you abandon your bed time…” said the queen.

          The discussion was very close because the queen creates the barricade around the table of discussion. The purpose of this thing was to not let the discussion leaked even only around Beastopia.

          Nightfall come, but everyone still slept, Zyuoga slept on the floor beside the bed’s queen and hug his bolsters while the queen, seems still fall slept with her crown float right up from her body. Suddenly, thunder sound, shocked everyone’s ear, the southern mountain was exploding. Many ghouls were out from the lava, they ran towards the main gate with their blackened long claws and dark beaston surrounding them. Harbringer, tried to block them with his great horn wall, for a while. Siren was chime in Beastopia, many people panic, running around with hand holding something or someone that could be saved. The twin guardian were drove the panic villagers to the very rear gates. Shakashmita, directly to charge to the frontline, he summoned brynhorn, creature from forgotten dimension. The power of ghouls was almost balance with Shakasmita, they almost avoiding the lightspeed punch. Brynhorn ploughed the ghouls and eat their claws. But, then, the much coming made Shakashmita leak his storm and got some scratches to his armor.

          Harbringer could not doing nothing, he directly shout, “Godmover!”, suddenly the sky looked dark and a big mountain drown to the pack of ghouls, enemies was decrease number, but there still more, with great black beaston and dark fog surround them, it was Nameless Ghoul, wore a blue yellow cape. They were strong in magic. Brynhorn attacked them but they burned it into ashes in front of Shakasmita, he was mad and throwing his royal helmet to summon Beasteldar the terrible, which able to crashed everything in front of him.

          Meanwhile, after finished evacuate the villagers, the twin guardians ran to battlefield to help the two guardians. While Cryptoriana prayed in the chambeast, a room that usually used by the queen to pray or worship to the god. She was accompanied by Zyuoga.

          The battle still on fire, but Aldebaran withdrew because he got a serious wounds and his armor had broken. He was brought by Ropyaku to his house. He was the first guardian which fell down in the battlefield. Ropyaku back to the battlefield with Groandur. Groandur came with his two big blue swords. His first swing made a crack in the ground and many ghouls lost their soul.

          Suddenly, something attacked Shakashmita until he drowned to the ground. It was the sign of Hellscream’s arrival. Shakashmita could not stand anymore, he vomited a lot of blood, Ropyaku, Juuroku, and Groandur stood after him to defend him from Hellscream. The true netherbeast had arrived and crashed all Beastopia soldier. Many people dead in vain. The green thunder drawing the land, it was Leorius Coolda, he sting Hellscream’s head with his green lightning, but soon, that power was devoured by Hellscream and spit back upon Leorius. The twin guardian tried to stab their claw to Hellscream’s chest but, failure, Hellscream broke their claws then they try to launch their speed punch, but very poor Hellscream avoided them and made them withdraw very soon. Hopeless, fear, surrounding the Guardians

          Now Groandur and Leorius combined their power to make Hellscream down. Groandur flew up and shouted “Scorpian Onslaught”. Suddenly reddish rain fell on the the Hellscream’s head, this rain able to melt everything even diamond. Leorius attacked Hellscream’s back “Yassei Kaihou, Light-o-fist”, this power was able to crash everything even, meteor. But very poor none of those brute attacked were able to hurt Hellscream and as usual, with one attack, Hellscream make two Guardians bleed, “Dimmu Funeral”, a power which summoned dark hands from the ground and made the victim suffer.

          Again, two guardians kneel down before Hellscream, knowing that, queen gave a sacred gear to the Grindergrill in order to protect him from Hellscream’s attack. He was on stage, but still hided the sacred gear and believed in his power. “This is swordplay, Grin on stage!”, said Grin. “whatever on stage, I will burn, crash, burn everything even everyone who dare to block my way?”, replied Hellscream. Brutal slice was launched by Grin and trimmed by Hellscream, Grin swigged his Hammace (Hammer mace) upon Hellscream’s head but his weapon shattered then, only one punch, Grinderdrill spited blood and he was kicked until his body thrown upon the big door from the main gate, and broke it. Knowing that, all of the hurt guardians fell back to their house, joining Aldebaran and their beaston became the barricade of the castle.

          Hellscream were entering Beastopia, destroying everything including the villagers’ house. Actually he outnumbered because both ghouls and nameless ghouls were decrease. But it didn’t make Hellscream flinch, he summoned the powerful creature from underground, Boneslaught or you may call it, Skull eater. These creatures would eat every dead body which they had met, the dead bodies, certainly from Beastian soldier or soldier from Beastopia.

          He arrived at town hall, where Exinta Rexian had been waiting him. “Greetings, the cursed pack, with all my respect, could you please to leave this beloved land?”, asked him politely. “I will sink this puny land with my blackened flame, I’ll burn down this in a minute then I will take the blink crown which makes me immortal”. Reply Hellscream. “Well then, it is so sad that I have to take your soul”, suddenly after said that, Exinta shout “Exacosian-exinta-exi” after that the tremors came, shook the land and crumbled all enemies except Hellscream. He still stood while everyone on his side crushed by the tremendous tremors. “Is that all? Is that all you have?” asked Hellscream then, he summoned his overdread hammer and slammed it to the ground, black dragon rose up from the ground and spit a black mud upon Exinta. But unfortunately this guardian avoided it and threw his golden twin axe to the Hellscream’s face but Hellscream repelled Exinta’s twin axes then catch them and threw back to Exinta and hit Exinta’s chest. Exinta was hurt, unfortunately he still able to stand with mouth full of blood. He swung his axed divine twin axe upon Hellscream but the axe was avoided and broke by the chaos gauntlets. “Twin divine axe, are no more”, said Hellscream and stared Exinta Rexian. “Rozan-Shinbun-Ken!!!!!”, someone shouted from far away, and a pack of spirit vanishing dragon were crashing Hellsceam until he bounced and crushed the wall. It was Rozan Syoryuha, “Just fall back then, Rexi. Let me finished this mud black bunch”. Said Rozan. “Roger that”, said Rexian, with the Rexian’s back, now the fate of Beastopia is in Rozan’s hand. He had a deadly dragon fist. Rumor said that, his gauntlets were a seal for his fist. He was a brave warrior that trained by Wu Tu-Gu, a mountbeast from Enshrinian Waterfall. Rozan learned an ancient Martial art, Dragon bender.

          Meanwhile, in the Chambeast, The queen communicated with her hurt Guardian via telepathy and still discussed. But Aldebaran made the queen astonished. “My lady, it is time to unleash the true brave, exalted knight. It is hopeless, there is no another way or we must offer our surrender.” Suggested Aldebaran. “It is impossible!” refused the queen directly. “My queen, I know your sorrow, but of course, you don’t want her to sad, do you?” added Juuroku. The queen silent, she was thinking. Actually the queen had a daughter, but her daughter had a mighty power and no one was able to control, even train queen’s daughter. After that, she decided to seal her daughter in the Bestial a long side with the ancient Knight of Beastopia. That event made the queen in a great forsaken, a year after that, queen started to forget the event and tried to rose her joy in ruling the Beastopia. Now, she had to decide again whether released her uncontrolled daughter or let Beastopia in flames. 

          Zyuoga also thought the last words from Groandur, “try to calm your emotion, burn your Beaston in the calmest feeling. Let your temper, spoiled, all your negative feeling drown in the calmest beaston that you have created. With that, you will able to summoned Crimson Kong”. Said Groandur. Then, he suddenly stood, “What are you doing?”, queen wonder, “I know, I was a spoiled child, the useless one, often make you heartache, I am the laziest one, sometimes make you mad, and now Beastopia is dying. I’ll prove you, that I can help the guardians rise their horn!”, explained Sun Hyugang. After that, Zyuoga concentrate his mind, and tried to lose all of his negative mind and soul.

          The queen had been being pushed by the dying guardians. In the end, there was no choice, Queen spelled a stranger spell, it was beastpell, rise the five cubes, these cubes were bestial. Each cube dwelled by the knight of beastopia including her beloved daughter. The cube had appeared, each cube had different colors, red, blue, yellow, green, purple. Cryptoriana took her glorious weapon, Staffwand, and then she knocked the five cubes emitted the bright light, until made the half of Zyuoga’s fur became blue.

          Zyuoga opened his eyes because he felt something possess him. “Mom, what you have done? Why I feel a great power flowed inside my body? And whoooooaaaah, I have a blue fur, half blue half red, cool”, said Zyuoga. “Behold my son, meet the knight of beastopia” said queen. Zyuoga aghast and speechless. “This is Axewound ov hell, great divine axe from northern growl. His armor is forged from a thousand diamonds for many years and able to restrain any crashes”. Explained queen. “With the energy of Neptune, forged by love and hate, learned the martial arts in god stage, meet the Exalted Neptunian who wear the enshrined gem suit which able to crush the enemy only one simple punch”, explained queen. “Oh my goodness, what a great warrior”, surprised Zuoga. “This one is the conqueror of spirit of celtic frost, Yeti, the survivor of Snowhateland. Legacy of Vanishing Dragon, Windfrost. His armor is made from Eternal Crystal with two red Pearl shield, those shields was big red Pearls, but turned into shield because his father is a smithgod, has the power to shape shifted any sources become what he wants. Windfrost has the mighty power which able to freeze an object becomes an ice, called Ice breath and then this is Icedoom, a creature that had born by Freezian tribe, Goddess Frostina. Icedoom has a coolest body, including his blood. He is the warrior who had claimed crimson armor, Ruby, normal people will feel hot when wear it, but Icedoom is able to wear it because this armor is Truth seeker, the wearer must have a pure heart. He has a power to make an ice nail rain that drop from the sky by summoning the blackened cloud, Frostened-rain”, explained queen, wisely. Unfortunately, Zyuoga touched the Icedoom‘s hand, Suddenly he jumped and scream “aaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuwwwww”, screamed Zyuoga. “I have told you, love” sighed queen. “The last, is my very first flesh and blood, lost her father in the epic combat against Dimenthorn, Her power is exactly same with me, Crystal shifter and inherit her father’s power, Coolthorn. Her name is Cryptina Saga”. Explained the queen with tears. “So this is my sister, mom?” asked Zyuoga. “yes it is, sweetheart, and all this five will help us to fight against Hellscream” replied queen.

          Suddenly, Neptunian saw something strange inside Zyuoga and said “So this is the last descendant of Beastkong…….” The Neptunian were injecting some power inside Zyuoga and made Zyuoga’s body float for a while. After that Zyuoga’s surprised “what have you done to me?” asked Zyuoga. “I have awakened a spirit of true warrior of Mountkeyan, Saigozou” replied Neptunian. “what? I ain’t understood what you’ve said”. Asked Zyuoga. “I will you the sacred weapon from the forgotten land, Monkland. Enchanted Double Stick, forged by divine hatred and soaked in the heavenly water for many centuries” explained Axewound while giving in to Zyuoga. Zyuoga was very happy and he was allowed by the queen to join in the battlefield.

          The queen gave the last message before they entered the battle, “I may useless and weak queen, maybe I cannot give you anything to pay accept peacefull life in the Beastopia. I hope you can beat this stingy rat and make Beastopia be an enchanted land again. Fight with all of your power, believe in yourself and keep work together. You are all the protector of this land. Just go, it’s time to show then no mercy”. Said the queen. The five, then went to the battle to beat the Hellscream once and for all.

          In the battle, Rozan Syoryuha, had a great wound in his body. Seems he was not able anymore to continue the battle against Hellscream. “Do you think you could conquer this land? Do you think they will bow down before you? this Beastopia, where boastful is melted and restricted, we are Beastian, the descendant of Elder Beast, Thronus. Beastian forever, never surrender. Feel the rage of Doragonian! FURY OF THE STOOOOOORM”, said Rozan draw his last power, summoned the roaring Dragonpack and attacked the Hellscream until made him bounced from the battlefield. In the same time an explosion down before Rozan. “Knight of beastopia, I thought, it was a fairytale, but it is……..” said Rozan then he fell. Cryptina send his hurt body onto his house to be healed by the queen along with other guardians.

          Now, this is the battle between Knight of Beastopia versus Hellscream and the rest of his pack. Zyuoga said “so, this is Hellscream the great?”, “he is more like Hellrat” added Windfrost. “Keep your mouth, I am the one who will rule this puny world with my Majestic power and…….” Said Hellscream but suddenly cut by Axewound with punch his head, Icedoom added attack with releasing the blue thorn rain. Hellscream was thud, he woke up and said “Galaxian Explossion!” hellscream held a big power like two green balls in his two hands, and then avenge Axewound and Icedoom’s attack. But Zyuoga and Windfrost defend it by summoned the godly spirit “Beast unleashed, summon spirit of lightning, Odin” said Windfrost. Zyuoga launched his onslaught, he were swinging his enchanted double stick and kicking Hellscream, His technique was called dancing in hurricane or Hurricanger, Hellscream almost could not avoided and parried Zyuoga’s attack. After stop the attack, Zyuoga withdrew. Suddenly, Windfrost Attack with Odin’s spirit keep sting The Hellscream with his Divine Lightning. Hellscream succeed to escape the brutal attack from Winfrost, then he said “Divine Hatred”, a power that draw a big violet blade. But that power was broken by the Cryptina which was called her Coolthorn, after that Neptunian step forward and showed his attack, every single hit, punch, and kick was launched to Hellscream. The last Neptunian’s Kick made Hellscream drown to the ground, but his pack was still many, and keeps attack to the Knight of Beastopia. Zyuoga said, “It is the time to show the mighty power of true mountkeyan”, “yeah kid, release it, release your true power” shouted Axewound. “Saisen, Goura, Zouling, SaiGoZou!!!!” shouted Zyuoga. Suddenly, a giant big red Ape appeared. “This is it, The crimson kong”, said Cryptina. “Let’s attaaaaaack” shouted Zyuoga. The Crimson Kong made a mass destruction in the field and destroyed all the Ghouls in front of him. Smashing every enemies with his gigantic hand until made Cryptoriana join the battle, because she wanted know the Legendary Crimson Kong. “Crystal Brutal Death Shifter”, said Cryptoriana and made the ghouls pack turned into Black Crystal. “Slamming Brutal Death Coolthorn” shouted Cryptina and all the ghouls down by the ice thorn which was rained on them.

          The entire enemy was down and the last was only Hellscream, he stood and absorbed all the living power from the dead Ghouls also his entire pack. He became a giant. “this madness must be stop” said Cryptoriana. Together spirit of Odin and the Crimson kong were fight against Giant Helllscream but they didn’t make it. Hellscream made them lose. “We can end this mayhem by using our final attack but we must do it together” said Neptunian. “Well, let’s do it!” before he attack the castle” said Windfrost. “let’s Kick this bastard’s ass” said Zyuoga.

          They all take their position to held their final attack “hwaaaah, Mighty critical fire” said Axewound. “Mighty critical strike” said Neptunian. “Mighty Critical Kick” said Icedoom. “Mighty critical Tusk” said Windfrost. “Boosted gear, Balance Breaker” Said Zyuoga. “Let’s do it together love” said Cryptoriana, “yes, mom” answered Cryptina. “Mighty Critical Sparkling” said Cryptoriana and Cryptina. They released their final attack until Hellscream grunted and burn into ashes.

All the knight including the queen was cheer. Sky suddenly bright and sun was shine. The battle was over and the Villagers had back to Beastopia. The guardians were still in the restoration phase and Cryptoriana had her daughter back and Zyuoga was promoted to be a General of The Main Gate. Outposts were guarded by the Five Knights replacing The Guardians for a while. After all the madness surrounding the Beastopia, now the land of beast back to normal and live happily forever after.